Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Chanki's fanfiction

My fan fiction is based on Shrek and storyline is created by my own idea.


Once upon a time there was a kingdom called far far away and beautiful princess Fiona. One day it was lovely whether so she decided to walk in the forest but suddenly dark cloud comes along from East side of sky and dragon appeared. Princess ran away quickly as she could but she got captured and locked in the highest room of the tallest tower in a very big castle. Lord Farquaad is an owner of castle and he treated princess as a slave. One night, a small elf girl dressed in a frilly pink dress with a cheap plastic tiara on her long blond hair flies into princess room to rescue. They quietly passed Lord Farquaad's room but they must go through dragon's room which was next to exit gate. While they were getting closed to gate princess found box in rubbish bin. They decided to use the box to camouflage so that they could pass dragon's room easily but unfortunately dragon awaked and an elf and princess got locked up again. Many knights in the town heard this story and tried to save the beautiful princess but the castle was guarded by a dragon so each one was killed. Also, Shrek was preparing to save princess from evil Lord Farquaad and dragon. Shrek is a big ogre who lives alone in the woods and is feared by the town's people. Every people in the town thought rescuing princess was impossible but Shrek bravely began his journey. After 16 days he finally arrived at castle and he astonished by huge size of castle. Shrek decided to abandon to save princess so he was heading to the town but at that time he heard the princess singing. "This beautiful voice must be princess" whispered himself. "Oh yeah! I must go into that castle and find princess" he exclaimed then walked to front of gate and opened. Inside of castle was too dark to walk without lights. While he was searching for princess the dragon suddenly stomped forwards to Shrek. He got shocked and hides behind the cage. "What should I do..." he grumbled. He was looking around to find any weapons dropped on the floor then he found old rusty sword next to him. He directly ran to dragon and jumped to top of cage and threw his sword above dragon's head. Amazingly the sword stabbed through dragon's head and feebly fell to the ground closely followed by the tail. Shrek laughed loudly but this was just beginning. Lord Farquaad sets all soldier and creatures to kill Shrek and he got surrounded. He didn't know what to do. Meantime an elf saw this situation and flies to fairy - tale village and told to elf in village. They arranged army and flies to castle to save Shrek from danger. When they arrived they rapidly sprinkled pepper powder to Lord Farquaad's soldiers and creatures. Shrek also helped. Shrek and elf defeated Lord Farquaad's army and successes to lock them in the dragon's cage. Lord Farquaad tried to escape but it was hopeless. Elf surrounded cage to keep on eyes on soldiers, creatures and also Lord Farquaad. Meantime Shrek went up the stairs to find princess. It wasn't much easy as he thought. The castle was too big and it was like a maze. Too many rooms and corps all around horribly stunk. He finally reached the room which was at top of the castle. He paused few seconds then knocks the door. "Anyone there? Hello?" he whispered but no one answered. He gently opened the door and felt everything was stopped. There was princess wearing white dress laid on white bed. Shrek carefully approached to princess saw her face and kissed. She opens her eyes and asked to him surprisingly. "How did you get here? How about Lord Farquaad and dragon?". Shrek answered "You are safe now princess, the dragon is dead and Lord Farquaad is in the cage". Shrek hold princess's hand and came down. When she saw dead dragon and cage she was surprised and she stared
Lord Farquaad. Shrek shouted to elf "We need to get out of here as soon as possible". They ran to exit gate and locked gate so no one can enter or exit. Shrek and princess greeted to elf and safely return to town. People in town couldn't believe their eyes when they saw Shrek and princess are holding hands. At that night every people had a celebration and Shrek and princess married together and lived happily after forever.

5 comments:

  1. I expected some twisted ending, but nothing..

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  2. Your story is interesting. Although similar to the first movie, its different enough that its original. And using the same characters means those who have seen the movie can picture what the characters look like. As with Katie's story, working on you English grammar would improve the flow of the story.

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  3. I haven't watch the original movie,but yours quite good,really smooth developing. Easy to follow,and I like your pictures setting in the perfect position.just some grammar mistakes ,using different tenses and some wrong words. Anyway, I did it so. Cheers,good job.

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  4. Its a great story and easy to understand to me your idea and creation were good well done !

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